Strictly an amateur effort, but a new video I helped shoot and edit. Constructive criticisms welcome, we're trying to improve. Thanks
https://youtu.be/JccFZ9jJnPg
Very nice. Not sure I can offer much in the way of critique, but just a couple observations (and I admit, I kind of skimmed/tabbed/FF through much of it):
One thing I became sort of unconsciously aware of - the video seemed consistent throughout (a good thing). I didn't really study this, just an impression I got. Consistent lighting, color, quality, etc. I think many amateur videos jump from scene to scene and it looks jumbled, and this seemed very good in that regard.
Perhaps the captions are a bit hard to read in some cases, the background action distracts some? I've seen some captions that utilize an active "exclusive-OR" process - some shading around the letters will be dark on a light background, and dynamically change to light on a dark background (opposite the color wheel), so it can always be read more easily.
I wonder if narration would work better than captions? Or in addition? I kind of felt narration would keep the viewer more involved, that's a fair amount to read and maintain interest? I dunno, just thinking out loud.
Was there a specific audience in mind, or just a personal expression?
Nice example though. Very nice work.
-ERD50